Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Feedback of First Draft: Contents Page

I also interviewed people about my contents page to see what was good and what could be improved. This is the version I showed them and this is what they said:
































After taking into consideration what they said, I may some improvements to my contents page.



As 2 people suggested that the fonts could be improved, I did so. However, although one person said that I had too much text, I left it because so did the contents page that I analysed, as well as the contents page I used as a template.      

Although only a few small and subtle changes have been made, I think it makes my contents page overall, look more professional as it now follows all the codes and conventions.                                                                    




















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