Feedback of First Draft: Double Page Spread






Lastly, I interviewed 3 people about my double page spread so I could make some final amendments to it. This is the copy I showed them and this is what they said:





I made the text smaller, as suggested by someone I interviewed, and added a quote in the middle of the text because I saw lots of double page spreads with this to intrigue the audience.




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